Blog#29

My current draft of my thesis is

Money is what makes the world go round, it especially fuels America's economy, but money has lead to many issues including the economic crisis. The economic crisis that we face today was brought upon by selfishness, and abuse of money.

P1: Selfishness has been an action tied into our roots since the beginning of humanity, in this case the situation isn't any difference

P2: Abuse of money was the downfall of our economy especially on wall street with the stock market



Money although it is great to have doesn't solve the worlds problems, it actually creates them (as we have seen in our current economic crisis). We must learn from our mistakes so we can fix the problem


this is what i have so far



Revised:
Albert Einstein was undisputedly one of the smartest men of all time. He was In America at the start of the very first stock market crash on Wall street in 1929 that lead into the great depression. Money is what makes the world go round, it especially fuels America's economy, but money has lead to many issues including the economic crisis. The economic crisis that we face today was not the first that we have had. The quote that I picked from Albert Einstein literally connects to our current economic crisis because it was brought upon by selfishness, the temptation to abuse money, and a lack of understanding from the first stock market crash in 1929.


Selfishness has been an action tied into our roots since the beginning of humanity, in this case the selfishness came in the form of money. This financial crisis was a result of selfishness with money on Wall street.