Tuesday, January 13, 2009

Blog #28

My current draft of my thesis is

Money is what makes the world go round, it especially fuels Americas economy, but money has lead to many issues including the economic crisis. The economic crisis that we face today was brought upon by selfishness, and abuse of money.

P1: Selfishness has been an action tied into our roots since the beginning of humanity, in this case the situation isn't any difference

P2: Abuse of money was the downfall of our economy especially on wall street with the stock market



Money although it is great to have doesn't solve the worlds problems, it actually creates them (as we have seen in our current economic crisis). We must learn from our mistakes so we can fix the problem


this is what i have so far

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